Hey @smiley65,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Passion ft Fabian hurtado '! π₯
Your bars are good, keep it up! π Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell!
Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. π
We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
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I feel u rush it a bit another take and u will get it keep grindin
Hey @smiley65, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Passion ft Fabian hurtado '! π₯ Your bars are good, keep it up! π Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. π We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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