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Hey @ruthlesstrap707, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'R.I.P'! π₯ The lyrics are fire, nicely done! π You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π This beat is working well for you! πΌ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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