Hey @dowyaneclarke,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'MAXIMUS - GUNSHOT'! ๐ฅ
You got great bars here. ๐ Some seriously impressive rhyming in here, you know what you're doing for sure. We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. ๐
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. ๐ถ Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. ๐
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
everything's dope. i jusy dont understand Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: Great ๐
1000 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
boy you got this Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐
savage ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Nice ๐ Delivery: Nice ๐ Impression: Nice ๐
great cool jamz Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Give me a follow Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Hey @dowyaneclarke, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'MAXIMUS - GUNSHOT'! ๐ฅ You got great bars here. ๐ Some seriously impressive rhyming in here, you know what you're doing for sure. We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. ๐ Nice flow here - delivery is so important. ๐ถ Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. ๐ Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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work hard on your production and sound system
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ