Hey @pappy_,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'on and on'! π₯
Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Great concept. Love the story your bars tell!
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ You're riding that beat flawlessly, so confident. Great work. π
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ
The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality.
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @pappy_, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'on and on'! π₯ Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ You're riding that beat flawlessly, so confident. Great work. π Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
work hard on your production and sound system
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