torn an broken
my life comes and goes without any hesition. without you, my life would have been torn apart after you left. you didn't even look back at me to see if I was still alive at the moment. I knew at the moment you will be knocking on my front door asking me if I want you back. these days and nights are not easy for me to deal with, your love comes and goes and but it always comes back. I wish I had the reason why your love comes back to me how can i break your image from my mind and it is just too painful to deal with. the pain that I have Is hurting me. I will never forgive myself for what I did to you. as days turn into night and nights turns into days I still think about you and your feelings for me. how can you put me in a position that can't be forgiven, please give me details so I know how to correct my mistakes. everything I think about is like a burning fire that I can't put out. you even told me that I will never be successful in life but look at me now. once you heard my voice on the radio, you knew that you wanted me back but I will never give second chance. I given up on you and I still know that you have feelings for me still, but I know I told you I don't love you anymore. so you left broken hearted, once you got home, you overdosed on drugs that I never knew about. once I saw the news I knew that something was wrong. but it still doesn't mean that I love you. once you saw me with my new girlfriend, you just got jealous of me and tried to come into my house and just to kill my new girlfriend. how could do that to me, once I heard my girlfriend scream I knew you would try to take revenge on me for not taking you back. I told you to leave before I do something back which would been more painful to you then to me. I will never love you again, I will even make sure my friends stay away from you. oh that's right they already have because they look at you some poor looking girl that has a broken heart 💔.
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my life comes and goes without any hesition. without you, my life would have been torn apart after you left. you didn't even look back at me to see if I was still alive at the moment. I knew at the moment you will be knocking on my front door asking me if I want you back. these days and nights are not easy for me to deal with, your love comes and goes and but it always comes back. I wish I had the reason why your love comes back to me how can i break your image from my mind and it is just too painful to deal with. the pain that I have Is hurting me. I will never forgive myself for what I did to you. as days turn into night and nights turns into days I still think about you and your feelings for me. how can you put me in a position that can't be forgiven, please give me details so I know how to correct my mistakes. everything I think about is like a burning fire that I can't put out. you even told me that I will never be successful in life but look at me now. once you heard my voice on the radio, you knew that you wanted me back but I will never give second chance. I given up on you and I still know that you have feelings for me still, but I know I told you I don't love you anymore. so you left broken hearted, once you got home, you overdosed on drugs that I never knew about. once I saw the news I knew that something was wrong. but it still doesn't mean that I love you. once you saw me with my new girlfriend, you just got jealous of me and tried to come into my house and just to kill my new girlfriend. how could do that to me, once I heard my girlfriend scream I knew you would try to take revenge on me for not taking you back. I told you to leave before I do something back which would been more painful to you then to me. I will never love you again, I will even make sure my friends stay away from you. oh that's right they already have because they look at you some poor looking girl that has a broken heart 💔.
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