0:00
0:00
back the f*** up you hoes in danger an the way I was raised I ain't talk to strangers if you talk that s*** you got hit with a banger swept out your clothes shoes thrown on a hanger got mixed emotions baby filled with anger but you ignore the signs you ignored my rhymes XOXO you on my mind I just want to make that p******* mine put your ass on my face like it's wine and dine we can smoke these blunts have you home by 9:00 p**** wet an it caught my eye an i jus wanna piece of the flipping pie !
You may also like
Leave a comment
back the f*** up you hoes in danger an the way I was raised I ain't talk to strangers if you talk that s*** you got hit with a banger swept out your clothes shoes thrown on a hanger got mixed emotions baby filled with anger but you ignore the signs you ignored my rhymes XOXO you on my mind I just want to make that p******* mine put your ass on my face like it's wine and dine we can smoke these blunts have you home by 9:00 p**** wet an it caught my eye an i jus wanna piece of the flipping pie !
I hear you fam keep grinding #flowaddict
my first time spit n like this since a teenager I'm 34 bout to start my climb
Gotta make this song longer man itβs sounds fire tho keep up the great work man π₯π₯π₯ Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Hi there @steveratliff, Here's some feedback on your track 'General (15:19)', thank you for sharing with us! π₯ Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic! You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! π Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! πͺ It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
yo nice track π₯ keep it up and u'll be on top of the chart
Wassup @steveratliff, Thank you for sharing 'General (15:19)' with our community π₯. Here are a few words to the wise from us: 1. Recording quality matters fam! Make sure you don't let your excitement cloud your judgement! Release your tracks when they ready! π€ 2. Once you find a good recording set up, stick with it! Rapping is all about consistency, try and apply this to every level of your music! 3. With effects, less can sometimes be more! π² Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! 4. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! We hope to hear some more from you in the future, we would love to hear how you take our advice on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Can improve π Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Nice π Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Great π Delivery: Nice π Impression: Dope π₯
nice Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯