Hey @ghettobiscuit,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Ghetto Biscuit Ft. Mr.Show JUICE _ Prod. by Melzi Trap'! π₯
Tight rhymes, love the structure here. β¨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. π
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π
Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ
The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can.
Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Finally getting back to me Recorded on 2022-05-31
Hey @ghettobiscuit, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Ghetto Biscuit Ft. Mr.Show JUICE _ Prod. by Melzi Trap'! π₯ Tight rhymes, love the structure here. β¨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. π Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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