Yo @yvng2slide!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Life pt2 Lil Jon'! π₯
Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. β¨ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ
Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track.
We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. π
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @yvng2slide! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Life pt2 Lil Jon'! π₯ Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. β¨ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. π It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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