BATTLE 01
King's kiddetermination got it from my mother so tell the nation they can never conquer me I'm out of the cage I'm always standing out in victory if you wanna kill my dream then youll have to go through me leader of the pack ready to attack so tell this assholes who don't know how to rap its a battle better take a shuttle before i get to you cuz when i do i ain't gonna pity you yeah king cyrqx kc always pacing you cant trace me cuz i dint fake it ending alphabet xyz always pricy taking chances oluwa daisi pronounce nicely im the king of the jungle i can never fumble if you fuck with me imma hit you with my knuckle bet you're bout to crumble bring the law suits fuck you i will hunt you i will find you gat no tattoos gat a title what should i do im in a classroom without my books but im smart so i took a note and changed the name its mine now guess it's time now to end this chapter
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @atom0064, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'BATTLE 01'! 💥 Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 This beat is working well for you! 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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