Hey @hyperdon1,
Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'one take '! ๐ฅ
Lit bars, keep 'em comin. ๐ Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. โจ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. ๐
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! ๐ถ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ
We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. ๐
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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one of my old recordings
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
nice Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Wavy homie i love it great bars and delivery bro ๐๐ฏ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ถ๐ถ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @hyperdon1, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'one take '! ๐ฅ Lit bars, keep 'em comin. ๐ Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. โจ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. ๐ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! ๐ถ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. ๐ It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
thanks for the comments im new to this
Great work bro you really rock it all the way around here
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ISSA MOVIE ๐ฅ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Gourmet bars, each verse a recipe for success! ๐ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Your lyrics are solid, but maybe refine the beat for an even smoother experience! ๐๐ต Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ