Hey @jasonhollis,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Slide_on_em '! π₯
We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
Loving the beat selection, good ear!
Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @jasonhollis, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Slide_on_em '! π₯ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Loving the beat selection, good ear! Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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