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Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Lil cry all eyes on my beaches MP3_1'! π₯
Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π
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Try improving your recording quality if you can.
Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @mojalefa.7442981! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Lil cry all eyes on my beaches MP3_1'! π₯ Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. Great beat choice, really works with the track! Try improving your recording quality if you can. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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