Hey @kohta,
Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'I <3 LEAN (prod.RiChLoSeR)'! π₯
Lit bars, keep 'em comin. π We like the rhyming, it's tight. β¨ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell!
Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ
The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it?
Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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I like it I think itβs really good do you have someone featured in it
Hey @kohta, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'I <3 LEAN (prod.RiChLoSeR)'! π₯ Lit bars, keep 'em comin. π We like the rhyming, it's tight. β¨ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
this track go hard never stop for nothing
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