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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Yo @jaylenbolton, It's time for us to take a look at 'suicidal thoughts '! ๐ฅ "I try so hard, but don't get far" - keep going we believe in you! ๐ช Good bars here, defo works here! ๐ Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. โจ Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. ๐ Nice flow here - delivery is so important. ๐ถ Pretty chilled flow gave us a pleasant listening experience! Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. ๐ผ It's subtle, the strings are nice! ๐ธ The singing is dope, we're rating it! Maybe add some voice effects to it to make it pop some more! ๐ฏ Loved listening to this track, we hope our feedback is useful to you and we are looking forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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