suicidal thoughts

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Yo @jaylenbolton, It's time for us to take a look at 'suicidal thoughts '! 💥 "I try so hard, but don't get far" - keep going we believe in you! 💪 Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. ✨ Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. 👍 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Pretty chilled flow gave us a pleasant listening experience! Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 It's subtle, the strings are nice! 🎸 The singing is dope, we're rating it! Maybe add some voice effects to it to make it pop some more! 💯 Loved listening to this track, we hope our feedback is useful to you and we are looking forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

RUSTA

4 years ago

coooool Keep it up and don't forget to check me out Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

👻 HOLYGHOSTTT👻

4 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

YvngJMD

4 years ago

Follow and check my music Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

👑MrEmanuel myseteri 🏆🌈

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯