Hi there @song77,
Here's some feedback on your track 'BIG SHOES -verse1_Lolita', thank you for sharing with us! 💥
You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 Your rhyming is tight. ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍
Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em!
The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality.
Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hi there @song77, Here's some feedback on your track 'BIG SHOES -verse1_Lolita', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 Your rhyming is tight. ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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