Hey @luhdeemoney,
We appreciate you sharing 'Take Off' with us! ๐ฅ
The rhyming is well put together. โจ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. ๐
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. ๐ถ There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. ๐
The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ
The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow.
We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @luhdeemoney, We appreciate you sharing 'Take Off' with us! ๐ฅ The rhyming is well put together. โจ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. ๐ Nice flow here - delivery is so important. ๐ถ There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. ๐ The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
keep trying bro you need better rap flow
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I hear you fam keep grinding #savagefactz
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ