new beginnings
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•17 Jun 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Hi @drealdeon! Welcome to our feedback of 'new beginnings '! 💥 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Wow that’s absolutely wonderful keep going
nice job mate check me out will ya #5kage
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