Yo @jasonwhite.7277668,
It's time for us to take a look at 'Sever (08:04)'! π₯
Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨
Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! π
This beat is working well for you! πΌ
Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€
We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @jasonwhite.7277668, It's time for us to take a look at 'Sever (08:04)'! π₯ Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨ Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! π This beat is working well for you! πΌ Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€ We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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