Last leaf🍁
XEN DARIUS90 Plays
•13 Jun 2022
Last leaf roll it up Lil bit of lean pour it up Stop all that beef nigga don’t want War with we cuz I’m certified in these st But you gotta get verified and I’m very high Might touch the sky drop top coupe when I drive by nigga drop to the st cuz he thinks it’s a drive by One wrong move and it bye bye Everybody wanna get stuck in them white lines Last leaf roll it up Lil bit of lean pour it up Stop all that beef nigga don’t want war with me If its beef ya gon get ya deceased So fk bein a beast ya'll already violated Aint no need to speak when im comin to squeeze Last leaf roll it up lil bit of lean pour it up
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Yo @daristackz! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Last leaf🍁'! 💥 Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. 👍 Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Try adding some of our built in audio effects which could really help boost this track! Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
This is really good! You mind if we sign you? Click my profile then click Eternal Xen Records then click request to join. You have talent!!!!
cool man, try to put more emotions behind your rap. you good though bro.
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