88 D Alchemist
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When I woke up in the morning, I got a strange feeling, Today’s gonna be the day Imma make millions, Imma do it on my own, Imma get it, Imma hustle, Anybody that, gets, in my way, Imma scuffle, Cuz I’m tired of the pain I feel, Gotta find a way to heal, Living life, Check to check, Getting debts, Paying bills, And I ain’t stopping when I make a mill, These haters like to say I won’t, Say I won’t, I say I will
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When I woke up in the morning, I got a strange feeling, Today’s gonna be the day Imma make millions, Imma do it on my own, Imma get it, Imma hustle, Anybody that, gets, in my way, Imma scuffle, Cuz I’m tired of the pain I feel, Gotta find a way to heal, Living life, Check to check, Getting debts, Paying bills, And I ain’t stopping when I make a mill, These haters like to say I won’t, Say I won’t, I say I will
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