My aunt dared me to write a Christian Rap Song in 5 minutes, then I recorded it in a bedroom using 2 cellphones a JBL speaker and a bedsheet thrown over my head. No editing, one take, all raw.
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My aunt dared me to write a Christian Rap Song in 5 minutes, then I recorded it in a bedroom using 2 cellphones a JBL speaker and a bedsheet thrown over my head. No editing, one take, all raw.
Perfect ππ hmm please feel free to check my new battles and shit #JK237. either way much respect πππππ Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
U sound dope on the beat .. clean quality vocals and real subject matter instead of the same old rah rah rah.. I like your track.. check me out when you get a chance I'd appreciate itπ―π―π― Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Hi there @lyricolx, Here's some feedback on your track 'God's Touch', thank you for sharing with us! π₯ Lit bars, keep 'em comin. π Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ Yo da lyricism is dope on this bro, maybe work on the cadence next time and youβll be in there! It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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