Hi @jerrodarvel!
Welcome to our feedback of 'LOST THOUGHTS'! 💥
This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work. Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! We like the underlying theme behind the bars!
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶
The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼
This junt dope fam! Great job!
Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin'
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯 please send this to @iambig7 he's on IG and YouTube he's out of Newark New Jersey he will play your song on the (his) live radio show at 9 p.m now this my way of saying why I gave you 1000 because you ready that's a hit so you gotta promote it on all platforms I'm your fan 😁
I definitely love the concept of lost thoughts he came in with great music I hope to see you keep pushing and working with your development please support me as well
Bars: Dope 🔥
Delivery: Dope 🔥
Impression: Dope 🔥
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Hi @jerrodarvel! Welcome to our feedback of 'LOST THOUGHTS'! 💥 This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work. Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 This junt dope fam! Great job! Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯 please send this to @iambig7 he's on IG and YouTube he's out of Newark New Jersey he will play your song on the (his) live radio show at 9 p.m now this my way of saying why I gave you 1000 because you ready that's a hit so you gotta promote it on all platforms I'm your fan 😁
this is on my playlist and I bump this daily I just had to let y'all know that y'all sleeping on Jerrodarvel!!!!💯💯💯💯
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this it I love the song an man the bar's this a hit man I want your album Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Good vibe love the versitality from chorus to verse well executed dope ish 🔥🔥🔥 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
I definitely love the concept of lost thoughts he came in with great music I hope to see you keep pushing and working with your development please support me as well Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
good job fam like this flow instantly 👏 👌 true words from the heart Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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