our love will last

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I miss you everyday... And i dont know why it has to be this way... but 90% of the time im completely alone... and all i can do is think about you... I wish i wouldve known... Or there was something i could do...to bring you back home...if there was even a chance...i wouldnt hesitate to choose... To bring you back for our kids... Thered be nothing i wouldnt be willing to go thru...its killing me knowing the kids will grow up without having you... When i said id love you the end i spoke the truth... At our wedding when i said i do... I married my best friend...people say i need to move on and theres other fish in the sea... But i cant imagine.. And I cant even pretend to be happy with anyone ever again... and thats the truth

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Brochclip

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

Wassup @brochclip, Thank you for sharing 'our love will last' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Can't hear your vocals too well on this one, make sure you're the right distance from your mic. Think about how you want to deliver your bars, and try new flows to show your talent. You're not on beat with this one, try practising your timing so you can improve on your tracks. Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. How about you try one of our Masterclasses? It's a handy tool to improve your sills by using our ready to go using. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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