life is hard
Joshuah Mbuya35 Plays
•25 May 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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I wan hear more from you keep working bro 🤧✅🔥
Hey @joshuahmbuya, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'life is hard '! 💥 Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
nice hook for a song, u should go back n write more to that.
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