On the floor

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On the floor

LL9 LLbobby free the guys

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4 years ago

See track description โ†‘

4 years ago

This is ok keep writing maybe try and structure ya flow a little maybe write about one specific topic

4 years ago

I hear you fam keep grinding #savagefactz

4 years ago

Hey @babyk2345, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'On the floor'! ๐Ÿ’ฅ Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! ๐ŸŽง Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. ๐Ÿ‘ Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. ๐ŸŽถ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐Ÿ™ Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ŸŽผ The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. ๐Ÿ‘Œ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐Ÿ™Œ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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