Hey @jamonejohnson,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Phucksake Jam skyzone', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. ๐ถ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐
Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! ๐ผ
Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @jamonejohnson, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Phucksake Jam skyzone', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. ๐ถ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐ Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! ๐ผ Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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