back on track

Tray TBK

Author

4 years ago

i’m sorry this just what it is please come back i’m not gonna lie i miss my late night snack yeah i’m not that good yet but i’m bout as fly as kodak but let me get back on track i’m sorry this just what it is i met a long time brother damn i think he my evil twin i haven’t even seen em since way back when yeah shit i mean way before we was men toten them glocks at cops back then shit i didn’t even realize we was friends till he came over and sat down and we talked about way back then i’m sorry this just what it is i didn’t mean it to become this i was raised right so remember how i always smile right that don’t mean shit but this for my brother way back when

Savage factz

4 years ago

I hear you fam keep grinding #savagefactz

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Yo @youngtraytbk! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'back on track'! 💥 Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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4 years ago

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