Hi there @big40xkingjj,
Here's some feedback on your track 'Slide with a covid mask ', thank you for sharing with us! 💥
This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work. We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏
Your bars sound amazing over this beat. Great choice!! 🧨
The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Effects can help improve tracks, but be careful not to overuse them.
The track has an interesting concept but definitely needs a little more fine tuning.
Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hi there @big40xkingjj, Here's some feedback on your track 'Slide with a covid mask ', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work. We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨ Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Your bars sound amazing over this beat. Great choice!! 🧨 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Effects can help improve tracks, but be careful not to overuse them. The track has an interesting concept but definitely needs a little more fine tuning. Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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