better me

Name: better me
Description: i strive to be a better me i wanna be what you want me to be i pray to the Lord my soul to keep if I should die before I awake.please know that this promise I make I will be the man im supposed to be I will not be fake.i strive to be a better me i walk my own path I set my own pace im out here today killing it making it my own way.i will be better than me one day

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i strive to be a better me i wanna be what you want me to be i pray to the Lord my soul to keep if I should die before I awake.please know that this promise I make I will be the man im supposed to be I will not be fake.i strive to be a better me i walk my own path I set my own pace im out here today killing it making it my own way.i will be better than me one day

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Thomas Crump

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4 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @thomascrump! Thanks for sharing 'better me ' with us! 💥 The beat is a lil' too loud for your vocals, try putting it down to get the balance right. You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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