Astro

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Astro

Shooting for the stars I'm an astronaut you say that you're a goat I put you in a curry pot I get it popping like a fist full of dread locks on a clean beat I get funky as a gym sock they don't know I'm ill til they test me I lay so many bars My vocab looks arrested God flow, I can get on a track and bless it side shows, I call my competition They ain't ready I'm cold as the winter soldier Avengers Bucky a bad man but I'm out the cage like a trustee hello Rap Fame, it's your poster child bout to renovate cuz I plan to be here a while so ya better learn my name like the school teacher cuz I'm bout to run the game I'll see you in the bleachers you can't see me like my mode is stealth I'm ahead of my time, dont get ahead of yourself

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4 years ago

Shooting for the stars I'm an astronaut you say that you're a goat I put you in a curry pot I get it popping like a fist full of dread locks on a clean beat I get funky as a gym sock they don't know I'm ill til they test me I lay so many bars My vocab looks arrested God flow, I can get on a track and bless it side shows, I call my competition They ain't ready I'm cold as the winter soldier Avengers Bucky a bad man but I'm out the cage like a trustee hello Rap Fame, it's your poster child bout to renovate cuz I plan to be here a while so ya better learn my name like the school teacher cuz I'm bout to run the game I'll see you in the bleachers you can't see me like my mode is stealth I'm ahead of my time, dont get ahead of yourself

nice read, not sure but probably you need to use headphones keep going!

4 years ago

ayeeee keep vibing ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏI can tell you freestyling and that's Cool ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž

4 years ago

Hey @christobin.7169113, We're gonna review your track 'Astro'. Let's get it! Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! ๐ŸŽง You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! ๐ŸŽผ The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. ๐Ÿ‘Œ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐Ÿ™Œ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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