josephsmigiel

elephant 1

josephsmigiel
elephant 1

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17 May 2022

I've been trapping everyday b**** so don't make me smack you in your face b**** cutthroat and I'm ready to go puffed up throw grenade in your flow don't tell me where to go, as I'm threatening to leave vaden your bedroom throwing bombs like Kiev too soon for that s***, popping guns I spray s***, popping bottles you ain't s*** pill popping like I was sick, keep it around the rhetoric, cuz none of your songs will never hit playing dice I'm gambling shooting the back of your head Abraham ha where you laughing this is the that I call distracting.. keep it amongst yourself keep it upon yourself ....(I said it b****) keep it upon yourself keep it upon yourself I set a b****. ha welcome to my lair but you better not laugh here cuz that a ak pop that red flare I'm juvenile with it when I come and I get it too many of them stupid b****** can get it ha and I pop that s*** back like I'm too cold for pop snacks like I'm drinking off the top rack many of the b****** already know that gunslinging you can't hold out archery with that bow back so you don't get a broke back.. keep it amongst yourself keep it amongst yourself (I said it b****) keep it amongst yourself keep it amongst yourself finaly beat and im ready to rolll final beat as u better smash that hoe throw it out with yo el Bow sticking to the wall like velcro i cant tell hoe smashed up and im ready to bust this place shots and bombs straight tk yo fave l ill bring you the change like a bargin but you know u aiiny hard then. stop trippin with the hard win did i tell you u aiint hard then ?

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nice flow on this although the Reverb on your ad libs is a bit too high. try rectifying this and you'll be good to go can't wait to hear more. Keep perfecting your craft and I'll keep listening good luck

2 years ago

Keep It up bro 😎 that’s fire πŸ”₯ πŸŽΆπŸ’°πŸ’°πŸ™ŒπŸ½πŸŽΆπŸŒπŸŒβœοΈπŸ₯²πŸ’°πŸ™ŒπŸ½πŸ¦ΎπŸ¦ΎπŸŽΆπŸŽΆπŸ‘‘πŸ‘‘πŸ‘‘

2 years ago

Hey @josephsmigiel.7128174, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'elephant 1 '! πŸ’₯ Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎢 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🀟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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