Thank you everybody for the love and support I really appreciate it I’ll definitely work on it and come back through strong thank you everybody stay up 🤔👊
song is hella catchy ngl 🔥 try and working on your bars a little more though and don't be afraid to put all your emotions into that mic, I can see you are talented, but with an actual verse with you spittin It could've mad the song a bit better
Yo @a6ildhsb7m,
It's time for us to take a look at 'Pina Colada (00:06:22)'! 💥
Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧
The shock value will only get you so far! Gotta clean up the lyrics if you wanna hit that wider appeal.
We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. 👍
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect.
Good choice of beat here! 🎼
The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it?
We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Thank you everybody for the love and support I really appreciate it I’ll definitely work on it and come back through strong thank you everybody stay up 🤔👊
song is hella catchy ngl 🔥 try and working on your bars a little more though and don't be afraid to put all your emotions into that mic, I can see you are talented, but with an actual verse with you spittin It could've mad the song a bit better
Headphone?!? Keep it up 👍🏿 try to ✍️ 😂 swinging
Good delivery, would make a good chorus. Heehee.
Yo @a6ildhsb7m, It's time for us to take a look at 'Pina Colada (00:06:22)'! 💥 Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 The shock value will only get you so far! Gotta clean up the lyrics if you wanna hit that wider appeal. We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. 👍 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎