What's up @jaydasavage,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Hold on to me '! π₯
Lit bars, keep 'em comin. π Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ The song clearly means something to you, we really think users will engage with this. π Its amazing how youβre able to share this part of yourself through music! So powerful! π
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Try switchin' up the flows a bit more to add some more variation on this one too! π―
The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ
The recording quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot.
Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! π§
Try adding some vocal effects like autotune & reverb to really help your vocals shine through! β¨
Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! π
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
I fw the vibe to this π₯π₯π₯
You should try some auto tune
Quality sounds dope π―ππ½
Just keep making songs like this youβll get more comfortable with your voice
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Delivery: On point π―
Impression: Perfect π―
good work with your creativity the project was awesome I hope they get you to support me and my music
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Delivery: Dope π₯
Impression: Dope π₯
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good vibes good flow stay lit stay grinding and bussin You UP π Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
CHECC MY SHIT OUT WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE π― Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
What's up @jaydasavage, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Hold on to me '! π₯ Lit bars, keep 'em comin. π Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ The song clearly means something to you, we really think users will engage with this. π Its amazing how youβre able to share this part of yourself through music! So powerful! π Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Try switchin' up the flows a bit more to add some more variation on this one too! π― The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ The recording quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! π§ Try adding some vocal effects like autotune & reverb to really help your vocals shine through! β¨ Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! π We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
the number things are weird idk how do all that way people don't just leave regular comments lol
I'm a fan only heard few seconds tho stoned lol jam more ltr
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Straight murder on the mic, each verse a crime scene! π΅οΈββοΈ Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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