Hold on to me

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Hold on to me

@jaydasavage #holdontome #sad #relationship #death #toxic #2k22

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4 years ago

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good vibes good flow stay lit stay grinding and bussin You UP πŸ“ˆ Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

4 years ago

CHECC MY SHIT OUT WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE πŸ’― Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

4 years ago

What's up @jaydasavage, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Hold on to me '! πŸ’₯ Lit bars, keep 'em comin. πŸ™Œ Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ The song clearly means something to you, we really think users will engage with this. πŸ‘ Its amazing how you’re able to share this part of yourself through music! So powerful! πŸ’œ Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎢 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Try switchin' up the flows a bit more to add some more variation on this one too! πŸ’― The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 The recording quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 Try adding some vocal effects like autotune & reverb to really help your vocals shine through! ✨ Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! πŸ‘Œ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πŸ’ͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

4 years ago

the number things are weird idk how do all that way people don't just leave regular comments lol

4 years ago

I'm a fan only heard few seconds tho stoned lol jam more ltr

I fw the vibe to this πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯ You should try some auto tune Quality sounds dope πŸ’―πŸ™ŒπŸ½ Just keep making songs like this you’ll get more comfortable with your voice Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Perfect πŸ’―

4 years ago

good work with your creativity the project was awesome I hope they get you to support me and my music Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

4 years ago

i would hold anyone that has any weed Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

4 years ago

a little slow but actually dope asf Bars: Perfect πŸ’― Delivery: Perfect πŸ’― Impression: Perfect πŸ’―

KILLED IT 😡 Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

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Straight murder on the mic, each verse a crime scene! πŸ•΅οΈβ€β™‚οΈ Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

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The energy could be improved on this one! πŸͺ« Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

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Strong Bars πŸ’ͺ Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

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