Yo @lavonjackson,
It's time for us to take a look at 'Cedah Lo Jingles - aint afraid of nothing breathing '! 💥
Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍
The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this. You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼
Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks.
Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Yo @lavonjackson, It's time for us to take a look at 'Cedah Lo Jingles - aint afraid of nothing breathing '! 💥 Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍 The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this. You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎