smoking shit

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smoke is spinning in my pipe twisting my mind left to right scribble nonsense talk to bitches checking paperwork for snitches eat sandwiches dont do dishes tell your girl stay out your business and i heard that your bitch was into fitness said she not commited but she into fitness cant believe you didnt know shes into fitness dick back as far as she can get it _aha_ give that b**** some credit found that b**** on Reddit and I promise you if something happens I'ma let it just forget it nothings better than when i get headed back to my pipe love of my life its a warm fuzzy night

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Jahaziel Mejia

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4 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Yo @JahazielMejia, It's time for us to take a look at 'smoking shit '! 💥 There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 Great beat choice, really works with the track! Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Lord-Plourde

4 years ago

work on your word play it was definitely very creative project I feel like you have good music just work on that delivery a little bit as well I hope to see you support me my g Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

Presh Boy

4 years ago

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DONMONEYTRAXXS

2 months ago

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Big Balla

2 months ago

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LIB Baby Aka Rhymes Addict

4 months ago

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