thought of mind
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i be kickin bk thinkin tryna keep ma mind steady dnt know if im quite ready dnt really know where im headin tryna not let tha negativity get ta me ya can tell a snakes a snake wen there skins sheddin its gettin hot my heads sweatin im feelin cautious my feet are tremblin tryna escape but i cant flee i got some dark thoughts an im tyrna break free. free ta create ya cant reverse ya mistakes but ya can appreciate tha leasons an tha blessins that come wit it cause lifes a blessin an i aint second guessin an i try ma best not ta judge people cause i know where supposed ta be treated equal. an sometimes i still struggle wen i look in the mirror im just tryna get a stronger vision so i can see clearer.
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i be kickin bk thinkin tryna keep ma mind steady dnt know if im quite ready dnt really know where im headin tryna not let tha negativity get ta me ya can tell a snakes a snake wen there skins sheddin its gettin hot my heads sweatin im feelin cautious my feet are tremblin tryna escape but i cant flee i got some dark thoughts an im tyrna break free. free ta create ya cant reverse ya mistakes but ya can appreciate tha leasons an tha blessins that come wit it cause lifes a blessin an i aint second guessin an i try ma best not ta judge people cause i know where supposed ta be treated equal. an sometimes i still struggle wen i look in the mirror im just tryna get a stronger vision so i can see clearer.
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