beginning of a new start
Tobi Adeola74 Plays
•04 May 2022
Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down
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Wassup @tobiadeola, Thank you for sharing 'beginning of a new start' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Try repositioning your mic to get them vocals sounding clean. You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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