make it

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02 May 2022

yeah in this game there are only a few people that will make it. I try to be good and not fake it. Every day is a struggle this people want to take it. There is a lot of weight on my shoulders, I remember when I was sober. life was different from what I was doing now. I look into the past realizing that I was having self doubt. looking at my self in the mirror telling myself that everything that I did would drag me down. I was struggling in the field I try to find my way doing my own things. I see the pain on every body's eyes is like I try to survive. I don't want to get behind. I do this shit for my family I want them to look up to me. Cause i am gona go hard in this hustle game trying to maintain peace trying to understand. I am the one who is gona change this flow without smoking dro. I got niggas telling me I don't fuck with you no more. its world full of darkness I am just being honest. people telling me to keep on this flow cause when you realize you got to go. At the end of the day is just you there is nobody. This people getting body's. Don't even try me I am gona catch a body. There is a lot of people around me they don't understand that I got to make a statement. I got to show them I don't even fake it. I am gona go, I know let this flow rap on my mind i think every time i used to smoke some dro but not any more I was just waiting my time instead of being on my grind. yeah homeboy i feel you on what you going through every day I try to make a song try to put on. I promise you that we will get a long you just got to hop on.

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2 years ago

Hey @miguelhernandez.7085708, We're gonna review your track 'make it'. Let's get it! We like the rhymes in here, good job.✨ We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. 👍 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 You're perfectly on beat with this, awesome! 🌠 We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Defo need to see an improvement in the audio quality here! This would really help level up your song 100x!! You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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