What's up @vsex_4d_people,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Stop hiding behind “Jesus Christ” '! 💥
You got great bars here. 🙌 We like the rhymes in here, good job.✨
Decent delivery overall, the track flows pretty well. 🎶 You did fall off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Try being a lil more creative and liquid with your flows, right now you're a bit stop start!
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼
The recording quality needs improvement tho, this will help your track a lot.
Some interesting artwork on this one! What inspired it? 🖼
The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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What's up @vsex_4d_people, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Stop hiding behind “Jesus Christ” '! 💥 You got great bars here. 🙌 We like the rhymes in here, good job.✨ Decent delivery overall, the track flows pretty well. 🎶 You did fall off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Try being a lil more creative and liquid with your flows, right now you're a bit stop start! We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 The recording quality needs improvement tho, this will help your track a lot. Some interesting artwork on this one! What inspired it? 🖼 The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
keep on grinding peep #mercy5
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