Hey @vsex_4d_people,
We're gonna review your track 'Dreamville (22:39:22)'. Let's get it!
The lyrics are fire, nicely done! π Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall!
Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. πΆ There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. π
This beat choice is perfect for this track, great choice! π§¨
The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality.
Love this beat, gives the whole track a dope effortless vibe and we like how your flow just sounds like a natural stream of consciousness. The vocal effects are overdone and it's left your vocals sounding pretty unclear, try cleaning that up a little for a stronger track.
Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @vsex_4d_people, We're gonna review your track 'Dreamville (22:39:22)'. Let's get it! The lyrics are fire, nicely done! π Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. πΆ There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. π This beat choice is perfect for this track, great choice! 𧨠The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Love this beat, gives the whole track a dope effortless vibe and we like how your flow just sounds like a natural stream of consciousness. The vocal effects are overdone and it's left your vocals sounding pretty unclear, try cleaning that up a little for a stronger track. Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€ We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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Also I have to be honest and come CORRECT, as I always do. I am not at all upset with anyone aside for 5 - 20 individuals, but I am at the point where if you want to truth! Iβll be happy to speak to while I still can. Lay me life down for my equal any day and ever day! Iβm a business man, self taught, but my joy of life comes from seeing people rise
Whom ever @rap_fame3333 is Iβm sorry I went to tag Rap Fame bur you come up when punching in @ra β¦.. Whom ever is for the people please if you would like follow along. Iβve been waiting a year, I am done waiting! Iβm being to the people! Only good people past this point!!! Anyone else open your mouth and say ahhhhhh!!!! Real Big
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