Hey @vsex_4d_people,
We're gonna review your track 'Dreamville (22:39:22)'. Let's get it!
The lyrics are fire, nicely done! 🙌 Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall!
Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏
This beat choice is perfect for this track, great choice! 🧨
The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality.
Love this beat, gives the whole track a dope effortless vibe and we like how your flow just sounds like a natural stream of consciousness. The vocal effects are overdone and it's left your vocals sounding pretty unclear, try cleaning that up a little for a stronger track.
Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
Also I have to be honest and come CORRECT, as I always do. I am not at all upset with anyone aside for 5 - 20 individuals, but I am at the point where if you want to truth! I’ll be happy to speak to while I still can. Lay me life down for my equal any day and ever day! I’m a business man, self taught, but my joy of life comes from seeing people rise
Whom ever @rap_fame3333 is I’m sorry I went to tag Rap Fame bur you come up when punching in @ra ….. Whom ever is for the people please if you would like follow along. I’ve been waiting a year, I am done waiting! I’m being to the people! Only good people past this point!!! Anyone else open your mouth and say ahhhhhh!!!! Real Big
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Hey @vsex_4d_people, We're gonna review your track 'Dreamville (22:39:22)'. Let's get it! The lyrics are fire, nicely done! 🙌 Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 This beat choice is perfect for this track, great choice! 🧨 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Love this beat, gives the whole track a dope effortless vibe and we like how your flow just sounds like a natural stream of consciousness. The vocal effects are overdone and it's left your vocals sounding pretty unclear, try cleaning that up a little for a stronger track. Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Also I have to be honest and come CORRECT, as I always do. I am not at all upset with anyone aside for 5 - 20 individuals, but I am at the point where if you want to truth! I’ll be happy to speak to while I still can. Lay me life down for my equal any day and ever day! I’m a business man, self taught, but my joy of life comes from seeing people rise
Whom ever @rap_fame3333 is I’m sorry I went to tag Rap Fame bur you come up when punching in @ra ….. Whom ever is for the people please if you would like follow along. I’ve been waiting a year, I am done waiting! I’m being to the people! Only good people past this point!!! Anyone else open your mouth and say ahhhhhh!!!! Real Big
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