Yeah, Running thru that field like a dark horse
911 Night Rider in a Dark Porches
Rookie Ray, be that one they always for
Play it smart and Dangerous, See thats my driving force
Looking like a lick, I don't do this type of shit
But when the money in my hands, Imma spend the shit
Keep a low profile, Moving militant
Not always flashy nigga, I see they be looking
plotting on me, Better hope that I don't get the drop first
Can't wait till ops make move, The goal to get em dropped first
Hot burst, Make em feel the heat, Like the summer time
Drop a verse, On these banging beats, Till the summer mine
Hey @RookieRay,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for '"Dark Horse" Submission '! 💥
Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
Good choice of beat! 🎼
See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track.
We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life!
Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Yeah, Running thru that field like a dark horse 911 Night Rider in a Dark Porches Rookie Ray, be that one they always for Play it smart and Dangerous, See thats my driving force Looking like a lick, I don't do this type of shit But when the money in my hands, Imma spend the shit Keep a low profile, Moving militant Not always flashy nigga, I see they be looking plotting on me, Better hope that I don't get the drop first Can't wait till ops make move, The goal to get em dropped first Hot burst, Make em feel the heat, Like the summer time Drop a verse, On these banging beats, Till the summer mine
Hey @RookieRay, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for '"Dark Horse" Submission '! 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Good choice of beat! 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life! Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎