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2 years ago

this track sucks

Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi there @kellywhite0813, Here's some feedback on your track 'Make It Happen (20:51)', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. Your flow is a little off, we think you can really tighten things up there. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Kellywhite

2 years ago

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.