I feel like you were very creative you need to work on your delivery and rhyme scheme just a little bit nothing but love my brother I hope to see your support as well
Bars: Dope 🔥
Delivery: Dope 🔥
Impression: Dope 🔥
Hi @lilzocxci.bless!
Welcome to our feedback of 'paradise_lilzocxci'! 💥
You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 Good rhyming here, keep it up! ✨
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶
The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼
We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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I feel like you were very creative you need to work on your delivery and rhyme scheme just a little bit nothing but love my brother I hope to see your support as well Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hi @lilzocxci.bless! Welcome to our feedback of 'paradise_lilzocxci'! 💥 You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 Good rhyming here, keep it up! ✨ Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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