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Yo @tothoodie, It's time for us to take a look at 'Mary Jane'! 💥 The vocals came out real clear. However you recorded them keep doin' it. Lit bars, keep 'em comin. 🙌 Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. 👍 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 Nice timing, you're perfectly on the beat. 🌠 This is a an absolute chillin vibe! Makes us wanna kickback and relax! 💯 Loving the "Ooooohhhh's" - why not try adding some effects to these like reverb or some autotune to get them shining even more! We rate the artwork looks-wise, but maybe you could tailor it more to the track, to reflect the subject more?! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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