Yo @tothoodie,
It's time for us to take a look at 'Mary Jane'! π₯
The vocals came out real clear. However you recorded them keep doin' it.
Lit bars, keep 'em comin. π Tight rhymes, love the structure here. β¨ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. π
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Nice timing, you're perfectly on the beat. π
This is a an absolute chillin vibe! Makes us wanna kickback and relax! π―
Loving the "Ooooohhhh's" - why not try adding some effects to these like reverb or some autotune to get them shining even more!
We rate the artwork looks-wise, but maybe you could tailor it more to the track, to reflect the subject more?!
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @tothoodie, It's time for us to take a look at 'Mary Jane'! π₯ The vocals came out real clear. However you recorded them keep doin' it. Lit bars, keep 'em comin. π Tight rhymes, love the structure here. β¨ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. π Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Nice timing, you're perfectly on the beat. π This is a an absolute chillin vibe! Makes us wanna kickback and relax! π― Loving the "Ooooohhhh's" - why not try adding some effects to these like reverb or some autotune to get them shining even more! We rate the artwork looks-wise, but maybe you could tailor it more to the track, to reflect the subject more?! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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