xoxo
Annie60 Plays
•17 Apr 2022
Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.
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Wassup @annienittie, Thank you for sharing 'xoxo' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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