Frozen (14:18:37)
Only if you could see what went on inside my head/u would understand y im such a fuckin mess/u met me at my low but u made me feel the best/stuck in the moment with yo head on my chest/ the way you feel on me can drive me insane/ sometimes i stay quiet cause i dont know what to say/ you got me hypnotized your the only thing i crave/ worse then any addiction your my favorite drug/ i could stop myself from fallin in love/ we be fuckin all night brining up the morning sun/ I love how you loom at me right before u cum/ as long as im with u i aint worried about none/i need u now your the air in my lungs / cant take this for granted cause It only works once/ in wana give u my trust but lately its been hard/it aint our fault the past left us scard/ if we get past the bs i see us goin far/ and we aint lookin back cause we headin for the stars/ “STOP”” its our life and right now is the time/ i wana make u proud to call urself mine/ and i wana hear u loud when i hit it from behind/ i swear if it was illegal ill still commit the crime/ just so when i wake up i can have u by myside/believe me girl my heart belings to u/ and i swear we goin to make it if its the last thing that i do/ raise what we created and understand eachothers views/ your the spark to my flame now go ahead and light my fuse/i know we have our diferences but fuck it your my soul/we can set that shit aside and together well grow old/ cause we go together like christmas and the snow/ we can ride it out together and ill never let u go/
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Only if you could see what went on inside my head/u would understand y im such a fuckin mess/u met me at my low but u made me feel the best/stuck in the moment with yo head on my chest/ the way you feel on me can drive me insane/ sometimes i stay quiet cause i dont know what to say/ you got me hypnotized your the only thing i crave/ worse then any addiction your my favorite drug/ i could stop myself from fallin in love/ we be fuckin all night brining up the morning sun/ I love how you loom at me right before u cum/ as long as im with u i aint worried about none/i need u now your the air in my lungs / cant take this for granted cause It only works once/ in wana give u my trust but lately its been hard/it aint our fault the past left us scard/ if we get past the bs i see us goin far/ and we aint lookin back cause we headin for the stars/ “STOP”” its our life and right now is the time/ i wana make u proud to call urself mine/ and i wana hear u loud when i hit it from behind/ i swear if it was illegal ill still commit the crime/ just so when i wake up i can have u by myside/believe me girl my heart belings to u/ and i swear we goin to make it if its the last thing that i do/ raise what we created and understand eachothers views/ your the spark to my flame now go ahead and light my fuse/i know we have our diferences but fuck it your my soul/we can set that shit aside and together well grow old/ cause we go together like christmas and the snow/ we can ride it out together and ill never let u go/
Hey @abecswnhuy, We appreciate you sharing 'Frozen (14:18:37)' with us! 💥 The beat is way too loud compared to your vocals, try fixing the balance for your next track. You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. To improve on your sound, play around with the built in audio effects that Rap Fame offer! Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎