Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @allenbonner1, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'wit heat'! 💥 Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 Try adding, adjusting and removing effects to find what works best for the track. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Allyn Bonner 8

3 years ago

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