Devils Desire (18:39:11)

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THE DEVILS DESIRE I’m looking for the answer with no reason why I can’t tell you if I’m dead or if I’m alive Searching for the unknown need see it with my eyes My mumma look at me she breaks down and cries I’m tormented by my thoughts don’t know where to turn Coz Nowone listens they just look at you till it’s there turn They’ll be sorry when they realise shoulda been concerned I used to have a heart till it fucking burned Torn between two on what’s reality Is it a lens or is it what I see The first one is what the gods told me Now I just feel like I’m lost at sea I used think of what I coulda been Now I just think of all the shit I’ve seen I told her I cant help it coz it’s in my genes Smile on there face welcome to the machine I see the devils face when I tryna sleep Can’t get it out my head it’s not like counting sheep I know what he wants he wants my souls to keep And I would sell him my soul if he offered my dreams

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$WI$DOM

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4 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @swisdom, We're gonna review your track 'Devils Desire (18:39:11)'. Let's get it! Your voice is real quiet in the mix, you should put it way up. The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Try improving your recording quality if you can. We think this track could use a little extra spice. Try out our vocal FX rack to give your track a little something extra. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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4 years ago

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