Yo @djsplinter!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'LIGHT BY RAPSTAR'! π₯
The lyrics are fire, nicely done! π Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. β¨
The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ
Dope recording, nicely done. β
Vocals a lil bit loud but this catchy! Next time turn the vocals down a bit. Cover art goes with the song!
Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
Leave a comment
Yo @djsplinter! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'LIGHT BY RAPSTAR'! π₯ The lyrics are fire, nicely done! π Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. β¨ The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ Dope recording, nicely done. β Vocals a lil bit loud but this catchy! Next time turn the vocals down a bit. Cover art goes with the song! Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€ We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Check out my contest track #SmarterFromTheStart Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
check out my tracks Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Shattering expectations, every drop's a revelation! π Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
π₯π₯π₯ Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯