if I die young
Brittany Payne18 Plays
•08 Apr 2022
if I die Young I promise that I'll be okay. nobody's meant to live for days. but hopefully when it's my time to go I'll bring a simile with me too the grave. I hope find the happiness I gave. I hope my heart is something that I can save. Life is a journey I'm grateful that I have the chance too live and learn from pain. So if i die young burie me in Satin lay me down on a bed of roses sink me in the river at dawn send me away with the words of a love song .
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Hi there @brittanypayne.6740918, Here's some feedback on your track 'if I die young ', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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